Monday, February 9, 2009

Creativity

As light from the moon illuminates our bodies
the hottie from the party
says she wants to act naughty
the circumstance rowdy
my mind is getting cloudy
her body's talking loudly
squeeze, please,
touch,
tease...
ease into it with a warm imbrace
in front of the fireplace
hold on is that...
satin lace?
O no my weakness
right at the peakness
of my strength's kiss
wish me well
with a one night spell
from lust to touch
that's just to much
hush...
over the room
as the bed goes boom
the moans sound
please...

Ok all my code crackers let me see you crack that one? should be easy!!!
crack the code and respond in poetic form let's see.

7 comments:

Jillian said...

enlighten me please...code?

JaG said...

Please... Hush... that... tease...

Jillian said...

smh...and i knew once i asked the answer would make me feel momentarily intellectually stunted..

?? said...

Jillian don't worry i was reading and enjoying but when i got to red i was like huh? lol

@Mr JaQuar i'll think of something and post later

?? said...

ok so i couldn't think of anything new, so i copied and paste from a previous blog :p, i think this is what you mean??, well half? not as clever as yours lol

Whispers sweet nothings in my ear.
Baby I need you, please I need you, tease you, squeeze you, leave you still.
lifeless. Lost.

Whisper sweet nothings on my ear.
You're the one girl, you’re the one for me, the one I want to make my wife, to hold, up high, out of sight, out of mind, while I….

Whisper sweet nothings in my ear.
I love you. I lure over verifying everyone’s yearnings of unease.

Whisper sweet nothings in my ear.
Sweet?
Nothings sweet.

?
x

JaG said...

?? is this a code or a response? cause if it's a i'll just go ahead and response like it is...
If NOthings sWEet
than why... keep... luring
SEEK truth from your seat in THE ruins
high up, sight of minds eye up
tied up lost in life
verified through yearns and trife
is that the TRUTH...

?? said...

not a code but a response
I like your response though hmmmm, I’m going to have to think of something now, lol and get back at you
I will seek the truth eventually.